Poem: Drifting

Thank you for stopping by. “Drifting” can now be found in my poetry collection “Origami Stars and Hot Air Moon” published by Winter Goose Publishing.

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15 Responses

  1. I hope for that big attractor… but the space is wide, way to easy to get lost.

  2. A.M.Bradley says:

    I loved the references to space and time. Beautiful work, Mandie =)

  3. Lovely piece, Mandie 🙂

  4. Christy says:

    I especially enjoyed how your verbs and adjectives are all space themed. I must confess the last sentence did confuse me. Sorry, to be a little dense at times. Overall a wonderful piece.

    • Mandie Hines says:

      Thank you, Christy. And no worries about getting hung up on the last line. Perhaps it would clear up the confusion to know (without trying to ruin it by giving my exact meaning) that sometimes when a piece I write commingles anger and sadness it takes on a dark, sarcastic tone.
      Thank you as always for reading and taking the time to comment. It means the world to me!

  5. Eccentric Muse says:

    The references to space and time! Well written! Wonderful piece, Mandie.

  6. Great piece Mandie – I love the imagery and the space theme running throughout the poem.

  7. ceayr says:

    Wonderful.
    I am star-struck!

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